Holiday Bonus: Caked Up Spirit of Christmas

785.45 - 808.935 Kelsey McKinney

As a writer, one of my favorite things to recognize in dialogue is where someone has poked a hole in the plot. And then instead of resolving the hole in the plot, they just have one character say a line. So in this case, the question is, she's like, why aren't there people here? Wouldn't this be the inn's most busy season? Yeah. And then he's like, yes, but we are never open. And it's like, what?